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Post by xXxAnG.eLaxXx on Jun 8, 2008 17:30:46 GMT -5
What you have to do is continue the story. You can submit up to 5 sentences per post. You cannot post more than one time in a row. Someone else could start.
Forget the five-sentence rule.
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Post by dark2nightmare on Jun 9, 2008 1:42:34 GMT -5
It was a dark and stormy night. Four guys were walking out in the dim light of the full moon. Their names were Sam, Bob, Tom, and Rick. They were out camping in the woods for their spring break. Then Sam heard a noise, it sounded like crunching leaves.
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Post by vanessal on Jun 15, 2008 17:31:27 GMT -5
Sam froze suddenly. There weren't any trees in the area they were walking.The other guys notice that Sam had stopped walking.
"What's wrong,Sam?"Tom asked.
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Post by xXxAnG.eLaxXx on Jun 15, 2008 17:41:21 GMT -5
Sam was unable to let a single syllable out of his mouth. An ice-cold chill shot straight down his back.
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Post by xxbetsaidaxx on Jun 18, 2008 16:17:20 GMT -5
'this has happened before' said sam 'what has?' bob asks 'this, i've been here before trust me we have to get out of here now!' sam screams and starts running away from the direction the sound came...
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Post by xXxAnG.eLaxXx on Jun 18, 2008 21:29:31 GMT -5
All of a sudden, out of no where, he heard a shrill and agonizing sound coming from the direction he was now running in. Then, he got knocked off of his feet. He fell on some jagged rocks and split his arm open. Blood streamed a river out of his arm. This was the least of his fears, though, even though he could bleed to death. The cut the rocks left was massive and deep.
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Post by dark2nightmare on Jun 21, 2008 0:12:55 GMT -5
Tom was the new kid in their small group, and he wasn't sure what was happening. But he knew that Sam needed help now. He took out his cell phone and called 911. Bob and Rick ran over to Sam to help him up.
"We have to get out of here now, before something worse happens." Sam said with a fearful expression.
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Post by xXxAnG.eLaxXx on Jun 21, 2008 17:52:11 GMT -5
Razor-sharp teeth seized each of their legs and started to drag them into a hole. The hole smelled of rotting carcasses. There were enormous puddles of blood throughout the hole. The hole was about size feet wide and twenty feet deep. When their bodies hit the bottom of the hole,...
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Post by dark2nightmare on Jun 21, 2008 21:42:23 GMT -5
the fauwl stench of rotting corpes filled their lungs. Bob and Rick tryed not to breath it in, but it was impossible. The creature looked at its next two victums with blood shot red eyes, drool was foaming in its mouth. The creature was ravenous with hunger and possed a lust for blood. Tom and Sam were still on the Earths surface, unaware of what had just become of their friends.
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Post by xXxAnG.eLaxXx on Jun 22, 2008 1:43:39 GMT -5
Bob seized a rock from the bottom pit. He attempted to whip it at the creature, but it instead hit Rick. He also tore a ligament in his arm from throwing too hard. He shrieked in agony. The creature growled at him in with anger and showed its elongate fangs to the boys. The fangs were stained in blood. Its mouth smelled like rotting fish.
Meanwhile, Sam's blood gushed out of his arm and onto the ground. He kneeled on a rock in agony as he applied a cloth he kept in his back pocket to the deep wound.
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Post by dark2nightmare on Jun 22, 2008 13:14:18 GMT -5
Tom said, "What happend to Bob and Rick?" as he hung up his cell phone.
Sam looked around with a pained expression. "The creature must have gotten them..." he said in a weary voice.
"What the hell are you talking about what creature?!" Tom exclaimed.
Meanwhile below the Earths surface, the creature pounced on Bob and Rick. Rick was unconcouis from the acciddental rock to the head. Bobs whole life began flashing before his eyes.
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Post by xXxAnG.eLaxXx on Jun 22, 2008 16:49:47 GMT -5
Bob retrieved the pocket-knife from his pocket and started to slash the monster. The knife went straight through its back but became stuck there. Blood streamed out of the monster's back and onto the boys. Bob didn't care, though, because he was probably going to get eaten alive!
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Post by dark2nightmare on Aug 16, 2008 1:23:29 GMT -5
The monster wailed in agony. The sound was pure torture to Bob, and Rick was lucky to be knocked out. The monster barred its fangs in Bobs face. Bob died instantly.
Meantime Sam and Tom were still above ground. Tom thought they were just playing a joke on him, since he was new and all. But Sam knew the truth, "Tom, they are probably dead by now..."
"Yeah right your just trying to scare me."
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Post by xxbetsaidaxx on Aug 18, 2008 15:23:19 GMT -5
"i wish it was but trust me this is not a game we have t_" sam stopped talking and looked up at the sky. the clouds were no longer there and the moon was shinning brighter than he had ever seen "what's wrong sam?" " i'm not sure, but we have to get out of here" they started walking north hoping to find a village or at least a cabin...
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Post by dark2nightmare on Aug 30, 2008 0:27:50 GMT -5
Sams arm hurt like hell. The pain in every step he took. "Are you ok?" Tom asked.
"Just my arm. We have to keep moving." he said in a whispher.
Below ground, Bob and Rick were dead. The only thing left was their left over bones, and intestance that the beast didnt eat. The beast was covered in their blood, and smell of roating flesh.
"Dont you think we should at least look for Rick and Bob?"
"Tom! Their gone!"
"How do you know?"
"Because, once when I was a kid, in boy scouts. We camped out here, in the same forest. This same night, 6 years ago. Half of us didnt come back, including one of the Scout masters. All that was found, was one of the boys legs and a trail of blood."
"So why did you guys want to come here?"
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